by Dusti Asbill
Submission date: 17-May-2020 08:32AM (UTC-0400)
Submission ID: 13
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File name: D.Asbill-N496-M03 x (18.67K)
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D.Asbill-N496-M03 x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Submitted to Aspen University
Student Paper
Submitted to Southern New Hampshire
University – Continuing Education
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Submitted to Argosy University
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Submitted to American Intercontinental
University Online
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FINAL GRADE
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D.Asbill-N496-M03 x
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
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Comment 1
Introduction paragraph missing
Comment 2
heading should be centered
Citation Needed
Cite Source:
Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles:
http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html
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Awkward:
The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
Comment 3
spell out abbreviations before you use them
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their employers
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Spelling error
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Awkward:
The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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Improper Citation
Improper citation:
Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific
citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html
Additional Comment
cannot use the et al for less than 6 authors initially
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The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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comma
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The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do.
Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up
with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you’re
trying to find a word that’s similar to, but more accurate than, the one you’re looking up. However, it
can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.
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not a full sentence
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an impass.
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what does lock out mean?
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comma
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Center heading
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an administration
Improper Citation
Improper citation:
Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific
citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html
Additional Comment
not enough authors for an et al
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The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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Sometimes
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practice
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apostrophe missing
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Run-on
Run-on sentence:
The sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
Comment 15
retention
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no comma after the author
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no comma
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one word
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these
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what procedure?
what is the foundation? It’s committees
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voices
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if you start with plural stay with it
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how is that different from unit councils?
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The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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comma
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what is the approach?
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Conclusion missing
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unbold
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where’s the reference information?
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Evaluation
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retrieved from?
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edition number missing
city and state of publication missing
- D.Asbill-N496-M03 x
by Dusti Asbill
D.Asbill-N496-M03 x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
D.Asbill-N496-M03 x
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor