Revise the following sentences to make them more positive. Give TWO examples for each, when possible.
1. Customers are ineligible for the 10 percent discount unless they show theirmembership cards. 2. Titan Insurance Company will not process any claim not accompanied bydocumented proof from a physician showing that the injuries were treated.
3. If you fail to comply with each requirement, you will not receive your $50 rebate.
4. We must withhold remuneration until you complete the job satisfactorily.
5. Although you apparently failed to consult the mounting instructions for yourMiracle Wheatgrass Extractor, we are enclosing a set of clamps to fasten the deviceto a table. A new set of instructions is enclosed. 6. Your application cannot be processed because you neglected to insert yourtelephone number. Positive and courteous Expression
In this assignment, you will revise sentences to make them more positive.
Examples
Negative
Positive
This plan cannot succeed if we don’t obtain
This plan can succeed if we obtain management approval.
management approval.
Because you failed to include your credit card number, We look forward to completing your order as soon as we
we can’t mail your order.
receive your credit card number.
You cannot park in Lot H until April 1.
You may park in Lot H starting April 1.
You won’t be sorry that…
You will be happy that…