I wrote it as a regular essay instead of a narrative. I need someone to edit it and correct it 800-1,000 words. Needs to be in MLA format. Need by 5pm tomorrow. I’ve my outline and rough draft. If you have any questions please feel free to reach out.
1. graduate from the police academy in Haiti
2.Qualify for the training
3.Finish the training
4.No misconduct reported to the Academy
5.Making change for the Haitian people in the community
6.Having financial freedom
7.Helping my family
8.Helping my friends
9.Having the money to move in the USA
10.Reached my goal
**** Bold Point are focus points for the essay.
The basic mission of the police is to protect and prevent crime and disorder in a society. The police are the public and the public are the police. They both share the same responsibility for community safety. I have accomplished many goals throughout my life, but one of my biggest one I would say would be graduating from the police academy on May 11, 2016 in Haiti because I finished the training, having my financial freedom and reached my goal.
All my life, I knew I wanted to make a difference in my community so being able to accomplish this was an ocean of blessings. Some of the people who were at the graduation were the president of Haiti, the head of police, and the representative of the US Embassy. There was about 1300 people who started the school with us, but unfortunately some of them did not finish the training because they did not score high enough or they did not obey the regulations of the school. The training was very hard for me. We had school every day and sometimes we spent all night doing exercises, but I kept pushing it. I earned three A on the exams. I was shocked because the steps to becoming a police officer were difficult. You can never have been arrested, you must have a grade of an A or be on the test for the school, you must follow the process of the medical examination, and have a good physical condition .Most importantly, you must practice respect and discipline all the time at the school. For example, if the director of academy received news from a person about an aspirant awaiting oath before the oath took place he or she would automatically be kicked out of the graduation .This aspirant would no longer be eligible to become a police officer in the Haitian community.
Also having the power to make the change for the people in my community was what kept me going reach this unforgettable occasion. To be able to protect the interest of the Haitian nation and my community and living a great impact was one of my reasons for becoming a police officer.
Secondly, not only was I going to be making a difference in the community, but in addition, I was going to have financial freedom. this extra income will allow me to help my family more because I was the main provider for my household. Also, I would be able to help my mom and dad when they are in need and start saving for the future. This extra income will help put extra money in my pocket to spend on myself and friends. For example,
Finally, when I was a child my nickname was police, but at that time no one would expect me to let later become one. To see how proud my mom and my dad were to watch her youngest child accomplished a goal meant everything to me. The support from my family was one of the assistances that got me through the tough days of training. They reminded me to never give up and when I had a tough day of training my sister would encourage me to keep going reminding me, I was closer to finishing then I was a week ago.
To conclude, I was very enthusiastic after taking the oath to become a police officer because I got my diploma, my gun, and my first rank. By becoming a police officer, my goal was to make a difference in my community become financially free being that I am the main provider my home and make my family and peers proud I was motivated by seeing the struggle my parents went through to make ends meet I was grateful for the support I received from my family.