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PLEASE ANSWER ALL QUESTIONS BASED ON THE PREVIOUS ASSIGNMENTS AND EXPLAIN;
1. Were you able to achieve your intention? What path did you follow to do so?
2. How does your original intention compare to the experience of English 101? What part of
the intention was fully realized? Which part was not as fully experienced as you had
hoped?
3. What obstacles did you encounter in achieving your intention? How did you overcome
them?
4. What was your most positive experience in English 101? What made it so?
5. What was your favorite assignment in English 101? Why?
• My favorite was Compare and Contrast…..( Explain more with detail please.)
PLEASE ANSWER AS FOLLOW;
1. What was your least favorite assignment in English 101? Why?
• This is my opnion to whome it may concer.
Personal Narrative was very challenging for me (please explain) I had to submit a second
attempt, because I didn’t get the hand of it
2. If you could make one change to the course that would have the biggest positive
impact on your experience what would it be? Why?
• I would delete all the charts and diagram along with all the extra work (please
explain better)
3. What advice would you give to a student who is just about to take English 101?
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This is what I submitted please folllow its part of the
Argumentative Assignment pls do accordinly, for some reason the Argumentative
essay is involved PLEASE SEE VIDEO ATTACHED.
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Personal Narrative Assignment.
The Heart That Expresses Gratitude Is a Happy One
Giving thanks is an urgent duty that everybody needs to attend to. I always believed that
self-care is important, especially in today’s world with numerous stressors. However, I had never
gotten a chance to give myself the self-care I always desired. My dream of vacation and fashion
venture was shattered when the pandemic hit the world. However, I am grateful to my father for
facilitating a trip to Bali to unwind and vacation and setting up a meeting with my mentor, who
inspired me to push forward with my fashion dream.
As a child, my dream had always been to be successful in the fashion field, even though
not as my major. My father has always been aware of my passion for this dream because I would
participate in fashion contests any chance I got, in school and within my community. My mentor
was my neighbor’s daughter, who is doing very well in fashion with a big fashion house and
great looks that make it even to the magazines. Even though the pandemic, her work was still
greatly appreciated, and she sold her clothes online, still making a profit. My father always knew
I adored her work and aspired to make my fashion work greater than hers. However, it was very
challenging contacting her since she lived in a different state and rarely came home, and if she
did, they mostly went away to spend quality time in their holiday home. So, my father surprised
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me with a meeting with her to share our passion for fashion over a cup of coffee. “The best
advice I can give you right now is to be daring.”
(Not sure what she meant). “What do you mean by that?”
“Take everything head-on, navigate through the storm, always be sure of your power
against every challenge. Fashion is about standing out, so go for that designs you think would be
controversial and watch the world appreciate it with awe.”
This was the best advice o had ever had. It made me feel powerful, and I decided to be more
intentional about my talent. I am now running a small fashion business with the vision of
becoming the best in the next three years.
In my teenage years, I watched bloggers travel the world and give themselves time to re-
energize. I had been working part-time and going to school for three years straight. I barely had a
chance to take care of myself and give my mind some time off the stress. The pandemic
worsened my situation because I was worried about school arrangements. We were laid off at my
part-time job since only a few employees would be in the building due to social distancing
measures, while some work online. My father was very worried about me and knew how much I
had always wanted to go to Bali and have the time of my life. Therefore, he surprised me with a
fully catered vacation. I went there with my best friend, and I realized how much mental stress I
had been carrying. It was beautiful, swimming in the magnificent pools, enjoying the sun, and
visiting the stunning beaches. We also had time to visit their sacred rivers and secret canyons.
After the trip, I had released all the stress and was motivated to chase my dream instead of being
gloomy about losing my last job. I decided to delve fully into fashion and start my thriving small
business.
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I am very grateful to a father who looks out for my career and personal needs. He was
able to see that I had the motivation to pick up myself and be great by setting up a meeting with
my mentor and giving me a chance o ease my mind. As much as we all want to be great in
everything we do, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; I am a true testimony for this.
Argumentative Assignment
PLSEASE REVIEW THE ARGUMENTATIVE ASSIGNMENT THAT YOU DID FOR ME AND
COMPARE WITH THIS LIST. TO BE COMPLETED
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Review Assignment Instructions
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Review Assignment Rubric
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Review the Writing Tips
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Review the Annotated and Good/Bad Examples
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Participate in Reader Review
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Populate the Graphic Organizer(s)
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Compile the Essay
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Revise the draft using
• Evaluator guidance
• Your corrections
• Writing Center feedback
Argumentative Essay
Requirements
Prompt: Develop an argumentative essay that takes a stance on a debatable topic and
use ethos, pathos, and logos to deduce plausible evidence in support of the claim.
Requirements
• 4 credible sources
• 750 words minimum
• Underline thesis/theme
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Argument Essay Outline Tips
Introductory Paragraph
Goals: engage audience, introduce topic. present thesis and supporting points.
Use a Hook: Engage the audience by grabbing their attention with a startling fact, interesting information, or important background on your topic.
Craft a Change-Driven Thesis: state your thesis, which includes an explicit argument for change and at least three supporting points, at the very end of this paragraph. The thesis should be the last sentence so that it can successfully anchor the rest of the essay.
Don’t Dig in Too Deeply Yet: try to avoid presenting too much of the argument here. You’ll want to use the funnel format–starting broadly with your topic and then getting specific with your thesis. The thesis should be the most specific sentence in the first paragraph.
Body Paragraph 1
Goals: support thesis, effectively transition between ideas, stay angled towards argument, include research & original insight.
Create Strong Topic Sentences: start each body paragraph with an argumentative claim directly related to the thesis–ideally, this claim will follow-through on one of the supporting points from the thesis.
Stay Angled Towards Argument: make sure that every idea and sentence in the paragraph works to prove your thesis.
Weave in Research: this paragraph should blend reliable and credible research with original insight to prove the claim made in the topic sentence.
Body Paragraphs 2, 3, 4 (etc)
Goals: *same as above.
*Repeat all of the above for as many supporting points as you have created. Each supporting point should be represented by at least one body paragraph.
Counterargument Paragraph
Goals: introduce the other side, strengthen your thesis.
Anticipate Possible Objections: imagine what the “other side” of your argument is. Then, try to think of ways to make your argument stand out.
Weave in Research: ideally, you will have at least one reliable and credible source to use to support the counterargument.
Show Your Strength: Even if you cannot entirely prove the other side wrong, you should still work to show that your side is strongest.
Conclusion
Goals: reiterate thesis and supporting points, provide readers with food for thought, avoid introducing new ideas.
Remind, but Don’t Repeat: remind readers of the thesis and supporting points, but do not repeat them exactly as you presented them in the introductory paragraph.
Avoid New Ideas: you won’t have time to fully develop and support an entirely new idea (like a supporting point).
Include Food for Thought: you can still include insights and food for thought on your topic–just be sure they are relevant to what you have already presented.
Flow Map
Purpose: This map is good for illustrating or planning sequencing, ordering, steps, and/or stages instructions:
Write the topic here
Summarize your findings here:
Course Text
About Writing: A Guide
by Robin Jeffrey
Creative Commons Attribution
4
.0 International License
Course
Description
This course helps students develop transferable writing skills by exploring the steps involved in the writing process through various rhetorical modes:
narration
,
persuasion
,
compare
/
contrast
, and argument. Students will write and
revise
approximately
1
2
pages as a requirement for the course, as well as critically review the work of professionals and peers. The importance of both global and sentence-level
revision
is highlighted throughout the course, as students are encouraged to consider
revising
their work for enhanced readability. Students also learn effective and ethical research techniques, utilizing the
Modern Language Association
‘s (
MLA
-Version 8) formatting recommendations.
Course
Objectives
After completing this course, students will be able to:
· State a purpose and stick with it–providing appropriate
evidence
and details as needed by the
genre
, purpose,
style
and
audience
.
· Organize an essay into a well-written
introduction
, body, and
conclusion
.
· Identify and compose the following types of writing: narrative,
persuasion
,
exploratory
,
compare
/
contrast
, and argument.
· Consider the rhetorical nuances of writing and how these considerations play out in writing:
audience
, form, purpose, and
style
.
· Understand and explore the rhetorical purposes and best case scenarios for
summarizing
,
paraphrasing
, and/or utilizing direct quotations.
· Curate appropriate primary and
secondary sources
in order to develop an understanding of a chosen issue and to define an idea and persuade a
reader
.
· Analyze and evaluate the validity of the various kinds of reading materials.
· Explore and analyze both
reader
and professional writings, as they relate to course topics and assignments.
· Develop a clear and precise vocabulary about what works and what needs to work in a particular piece of writing by participating in critical reading review.
· Give credit to sources when credit is due using the
Modern Language Association
‘s (
MLA
‘s) format and
style
guide.
· Successfully
revise
and proofread all aspects of an essay.
· Throughout all stages of the writing process, demonstrate control over
language
:
grammar
,
mechanics
, and
tone
.
MLA
Research Guidelines and Formatting
This course follows the research guidelines of the
Modern Language Association
(
MLA
). These guidelines are reflected in the
MLA
Handbook for Writers of Research Papers (8th ed.).
Academic Honesty
Academic honesty is expected of all students.
To reflect academic honesty, students must:
· Submit only their own work.
· Use quotations and citations to indicate words taken from another source.
·
Cite
instances of
paraphrasing
(rewording) information.
·
Cite
ideas or examples that are not general knowledge.
Important Course-Related Terms
In this course, different terms are used to designate tasks:
·
Tutoring
: memberships include online
tutoring
for students to access with any content/
subject
related questions in the place of faculty. If your tutor is not able to answer your questions please contact a student advisor.
· Graded Exercises: Informal writing opportunities or quizzes. These are graded for completion.
· Writing Assignment*: A written piece that will be submitted for a grade when the final draft is complete. Your final grade for each assignment is calculated from the raw score provided from. If you have any questions about your calculated Assignment grade, please contact your course advisor. Writing exercises and assignments may only be submitted as , x, .rtf, or .txt files.
· Graded Quiz: A graded online assessment.
*Each Graded Writing Assignment must be completed to complete this course.
Course Evaluation Criteria
Your score provides a percentage score and letter grade for each course. A passing percentage is
7
0% or higher.
There are a total of
1000
points in the course:
All required assignments must be submitted in order to be issued a transcript.
Topic |
Assessment |
Points Available |
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1 |
Graded Exercise: Academic Honesty Quiz |
40 |
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Graded Exercise: Setting an Intention |
20 |
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2 |
Writing Assignment: The Personal Narrative |
22 5 |
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3 |
Writing Assignment: The Persuasive Letter |
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4 |
Writing Assignment: The |
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5 |
Writing Assignment: The Argumentative Essay |
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6 |
Graded Exercise: Revisiting Your Intention |
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Graded Exercise: Final Self-Assessment |
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Total |
1000 |
Lesson Topic |
Subtopics |
Objectives |
Course |
· Review the Course · Review the Academic Honesty Policy · Assess understanding of |
|
Getting Started |
· Set an |
|
Writing Assignment 1 – The Personal Narrative |
· Telling a story · Story format · Story development · · Character · Sensory details/ · |
· Review and engage content as necessary · Draft and · Participate in optional draft review through · · Submit your Personal Narrative for evaluation |
Writing Assignment 2 – The Persuasive Letter |
· · Rhetorical situation · · · Appeals: · Persuasive vs argument writing · · Topic sentences |
· Review and engage content as necessary
· Draft and · Participate in optional draft review through
reader review · Submit your Persuasive Letter for evaluation |
7 |
Course Wrap-Up |
· Analyze course intention · Final self-assessment |
Appendices
Appendix A |
Lessons on Writing |
Appendix B |
Revision and Proofreading Tools |
Appendix C |
Formatting and Submitting Your Work |
Appendix D |
Procuring and Citing Sources |
StraighterLine Credit Transfer Guarantee
Appendix A
Lessons on Writing
Appendix B
Revision and Proofreading Tools
Appendix C
Formatting and Submitting Your Work
Appendix D
Procuring and Citing Sources
StraighterLine Credit Transfer Gu