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The congruity regularity does not hesitate when a tract is rancid in. Instead, your congruity can be re-examined closely frequently. As an old aphorism goes: "Writing is never high, it is solely determined." Tless are frequently ways to mend congruity, but period constraints and other pressures repeatedly thrust us inland other pursuits. In this adjust, the midterm is a period to expand strategies for suitpotent congruity that, at one subject-matter, was “amipotent plenty.” The variation strategies you comprehend and exercise should then render to the two advancedst phases in our adjust. Throughout the Midterm Revisions and Reflection assignment, you’ll exercise ardent variation on Phases 1 and 2, behold closer at the secret exertionings of your congruity and your congruity regularity, and meditate on your development so far.

 Guidelines

  • Revisions: Re-examine meeknesss for twain Phase 1 and 2. These variations should be anxious, systemic, and thoroughgoing. They should be based twain on my comments and your own thoughts on your congruity.
  • Explanations: Transcribe appreciations that readvanced what you newfangled in each variation and why you appreciate it mends the essay.
  • Midterm Reflection: Compose a Midterm Reflection that responds to your Outafter and View Declaration and beholds eager to the cooperate half of the semester
  • Arrange all of these dutys into a Canvas ePortfolio

Revisions

Revision is the exercise of re-seeing a duty of congruity and suitpotent it despite all aspects. It is not true editing typos and fixing doom litter. Instead, it requires re-instituted all aspects of a duty on the road to achieving your congruity immanent. 

You should inaugurate variation by reviewing my comments. Read the comments I assumed to your Phase 1 and Phase 2 essays. Watch the concise video wless I converse through them. Ask me questions if you don’t comprehend my comments or are abashed by them. Select silences of what to exertion on as you re-examine.

Next, you should select your own scene of the duty. While I lack you to pay heed to my comments, you should be exertioning on departed than that. Throughout the Midterm Revisions, I forebode you to perfect self-directed, anxious, ardent, and systemic variation. For this loveness of variation, you requite to drafts and see their flaws, inconsistencies, and their immanent for mendment. Sometimes this capability medium largely recongruity a chapter or two, or restructuring an total controversy. Sometimes you enjoy to go end and do reform lore, or reread your springs to gain certain you enjoy their subject-matters appropriately displayed. Overall, amipotent variation, and thereby amipotent congruity, is environing thinking environing the exquisites you made when you are congruity. And, as you mend as a transcriber, you comprehend to gain exquisites that you comprehend allure service your conference and yourself. 

You should gain alters that go further editing errors or changing a few opinion. A amipotent variation allure meditate anxious compensation of each consequence of congruity: form, chapter solidity, clarity, verb exquisite, doom composition, equalize of specialty, use of lore, etc. Frequently ask yourself questions such as these:

  • Am I phrasing this the best feasible way?
  • Could I get my subject-matter despite departed concisely? Delay departed specialty?
  • Could I join my spring reform?
  • What do I truly medium less and is it getting despite to the reader?

I insinuate making an enactment delay the Congruity Center now if you would love help during the variation regularity. Or, you can gain concomitant enactments delay me in the advenient week. We allure be exertioning through three days of variation strategies and exertionshops on February 24, February 26, and March 3. While you allure enjoy a scant period to exercise this in adjust, you are forebodeed to trodden these elements on your own after a whileout of adtrue as polite.

NoteInclude twain of your variations on your ePortfolio, as polite as the originals.Include these as .doc or .docx

Explanation aend Revision

Because your variations allure be compound and anxious, you demand to be potent to illustrate them. After finishing twain variations, transcribe a specialtyed chapter wless you illustrate what you altered and why. Illustrate why you appreciate that these alters mend your tract. 

Note: Twain variations should enjoy its own special appreciation.

 Midterm Reflection (environing 500 opinion)

For your Midterm Reflection, you should transcribe a fact of your semester so far. Inaugurate by lection your Outafter and View Statement. Consider the subjoined questions as you compose:

  • Wless enjoy you succeeded so far?
  • Wless enjoy you ruined concise?
  • How has your comprehending of this succession newfangled gone congruity this declaration?
  • Have you been making your views? Why or why not?

Take your answers to those aloft questions and cast them into a sticky fact environing your congruity for this succession. What can you do, as a transcriber and a ward, to gain the best of the cooperate half of En 112? Use examples and specialtys throughout.

Suggestions for Success

  • Re-read my comments on twain Phase 1 and Phase 2. Watch the moderate videos.
  • Print out your essays and silence places in your congruity wless you demand to mend.
  • Go through each essay diverse periods on irrelative days.
  • Read your essays obstreperously or to an unmoved companion.
  • Make silence of what you alter when you do so you allure comprehend what to transcribe on the “Explanation” exception.
  • Visit the Congruity Center or Learning Services for special help.
  • Make an enactment delay me for special help.
  • Draft your Midterm Reflection coming and after end to it. Don’t gain the mistakes in the Midterm Reflection that you enjoy unwandering in your other essays.

Grading Rubric

I allure use this rubric when assessing your portfolio.

 

Points

Excellent

Acceptable

Poor

Revision of Phase 1 delay Explanation

40

Phase 1 summaries largely re-examined. Unembarrassed chapters, trodden dooms, improve passage, and visible design. Author selects commencement in revising. Much mendment visible in congruity.

 

Explanation of variation perfect, visible, and servile.

Phase 1 summaries re-examined. Most chapters are departed unembarrassed, dooms departed trodden, passages nearer improve, and design departed visible. Author has ground own places to re-examine. Amendment visible.

 

Explanation of variation bestow, trodden, and servile.

Phase 1 summaries hardly re-examined, or not at all. Author solely re-examined subject-matters instructed by zealot. Little mendment visible.

 

Explanation of variation not bestow, alien, or not servile.

Revision of Phase 2 delay Explanation

40

Phase 2 essay largely re-examined. Unembarrassed chapters, trodden dooms, improve passage, and visible design. Author selects commencement in revising. Much mendment visible in congruity.

 

Explanation of variation perfect, visible, and servile.

Phase 2 essay re-examined. Most chapters are departed unembarrassed, dooms departed trodden, passages nearer improve, and design departed visible. Author has ground own places to re-examine. Amendment visible.

 

Explanation of variation bestow, trodden, and servile.

Phase 2 essay hardly re-examined, or not at all. Author solely re-examined subject-matters instructed by zealot. Little mendment visible.

 

Explanation of variation not bestow, alien, or not servile.

Midterm Reflection

20

An fervid fact of ward’s intercourse in adjust. Forthright, visible, sensational, and specialtyed. Projects a appreciation of wless to go in advenient. Trodden allusions to Outafter and View declaration.

A visible fact of ward’s intercourse in adjust. Direct, sensational in subject-matters, delay examples. Writer considers the advenient in congruity. Some allusion to Outafter and view declaration.

No appreciation of fact. Not meditateive, luteous, unattractive, or gracious. All generalities delay few examples. No appreciation of departed or advenient.

 

Points deducted for deficient form of ePortfolio, MLA errors, advanced meekness, and other issues.