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I think your resume and cover letter look very professional – you’ve used a mostly consistent layout, font, margins, etc. and you have some impressive experience working for a large financial institution – but you have not customized your cover letter or resume to the position you chose or the program you’re in. For example, outside of referring to the job title, there’s no mention of payroll, sick leave or any of the major keywords/phrases from the job posting. You also don’t refer to any HR-specific knowledge or interest and a good portion of your cover letter is from a searchable template online.
Please choose a new job posting for a co-op/internship position, consider why you are interested in it, how you are qualified in and then write a resume and cover letter that are customized/tailored to that position. You will need to score above a 70% to pass this assignment and course
Job posting link:
https://ca.indeed.com/viewjob?jk=4008ba08eb89e586&from=notifcenter_webapp_labs_chat_post_apply_invite_notification
AYA YOUNUS
Mississauga, CanadaL5A 2H5 ♦
Younusay@sheridancollege.ca
PROFESSIONAL SUMMARY
Motivated human resources student available for full time shift. Considered hardworking, punctual, and
driven. helping the team in problem solving, administrative work and MS office
SKILLS
• excellent communication and customer service
skills
• Building customized solutions
• Administrative and office work
• excellent computer skills including MS office
• problem resolution, conflict management
• fluency in English, Arabic and Turkish
WORK HISTORY
Personal Banking Associate April 2021- present
TD Canada Trust
• Managed portfolio of accounts and monitored for issues in need of attention.
• Developed tailored solutions to meet individual banking needs.
• Provided advice on different bank products and financial options.
• Understood and applied selling techniques to open, develop and close sales and created product interest
by actively cross-selling products and services to pursue customers.
Customer Service Associate. Feb 2020-April 2021
TD Canada Trust
• Improved operational efficiencies while managing customers’ requests, store inventory, transactions,
new purchase orders and pricing needs.
• Developed and actualized customer service initiatives to decrease wait times.
• Maintained customer satisfaction with forward-thinking strategies focused on addressing customer needs
and resolving concerns.
Key Holder Supervisor. July 2017-Feb 2020
Palmyra Mediterranean House
• Used weekly financial data to analyze company growth and optimize operational strategies.
• Submitted reports to senior management to aid in business decision-making and planning.
• Offered hands-on assistance to customers, assessing needs and maintaining current knowledge of
consumer preferences.
Sales Associate July 2016-July 2017
Bombay & Co
• Engaged with customers to effectively build rapport and lasting relationships.
• Solved customer challenges by offering relevant products and services.
• Trained and developed new hires in company processes, product knowledge, customer service and
selling techniques.
• Provided positive first impressions to welcome existing, new and potential customers.
EDUCATION
BBA: Bachelor of Business Human Resources April 2023
Sheridan College Canada, Mississauga
High School Diploma: May 2014
NCS High school United Arab Emirates, Dubai
AYA YOUNUS
Mississauga, ON L5A 2H5
Younusay@sheridancollege.ca
February 1, 2022
Simcoe County District School Board
RE: Human Resource Services Assistant – Payroll
Dear Hiring committee,
In my pursuit of new creative endeavors, I was excited to find the Human Resource Services Assistant –
Payroll opportunity with Simcoe County District School Board. As a progressive professional with
administrative experience, I believe that I can bring valuable contributions to your team.
Identifying innovative approaches and improved solutions to business challenges both motivate and drive
me. Observation, inspiration, and determination are my foundation for success. My philosophy is that
introducing fresh perspectives and new techniques allow businesses to evolve and grow. Similar to Simcoe
County District School Board, my goal is to remain on the cutting-edge of advancements.
Formerly in my Personal Banker role, my successes have stemmed from essential skills, including written
and verbal and problem solving. I have enhanced my decision-making abilities and cultivated a reputation as
a major contributor through communication and critical thinking. I am a collaborative team player who is
always searching for opportunities to impart valuable insights. With these qualities, I am able to facilitate
positive change and impacting outcomes.
For a greater presentation of my background and qualifications, please review my attached resume. I am
eager to speak with you and greatly appreciate your consideration.
Sincerely,
Aya Younus
- Coop assignmnet 2
Resume feedback:
I have reviewed your Resume and Cover Letter. and included detailed comments to help you succeed in this position. In addition to the comments, I included in the documents, I encourage you to consider the following as well:
· Make sure to submit your resume and cover letter in a pdf format.
· Include your Resume and Cover Letter in one document and make sure that the cover letter comes first.
· Conduct company research and include some of the company’s values and goals and how you can help them improve them and meet them.
· Make sure to hyperlink your e-mail and LinkedIn profile.
· Only include skills and competencies that are relevant to the job you are applying for. If you do not have them, try to align your transferable skills and your learning experience to the role and responsibilities of the role you are applying for.
Please refer to the above notes and feel free to reach out if you have any questions or need a second review after considering the notes.
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